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“No...” the young woman whispered. “Please...”
Her thin, beaten frame was being pulled down the small dirty street by a man who reeked of alcohol.
“Please. Let go.” she brought out a bit louder, but her sore throat reacted with immense pain. A (h/c) strand of hair fell out of her bun and into her face.
A nearby watcher finally grasped the man and told him to let her go.
“Don't tell me what I should do with her!” he yelled at the helping man, who stepped back a bit at the harsh tone.
When they passed by another few men, she looked up to plead for help, her bloodshot (e/c) eyes wide and helpless, her face covered with several bruises and sunk in cheeks.


A young and tall blonde with blue eyes finally stepped in.
“Zhat is enough.” he told the drunken man. “Let her go.”
“Keep out!” the drunkard only replied.
“Nein.” the tall blonde answered and now the girl recognized his accent, German.
“Bitte...” she huffed out. “Bitte...” pleading for his help with one of the few German words she knew.
The blue eyes widened and then he glared at the drunk man who had her in his grasp. “I told you to let her go.”
The man tried pulling her away and growled lowly.
It was so fast that she didn't really saw what happened with her bloodshot eyes. But then she felt the warmth of the tall German against her and only saw his chest right in front of her and knew he held her close, away from the man hurting her, dragging her.
She clutched his shirt with her weak hands, silently begging him to keep her safe.


Ludwig felt her small, shaking hands clutch his shirt and he pressed her even closer. With one hand he had thrown the man, loosening his grip on the girl and then took her close as the drunkard was on the floor, trying to catch his breath.
As he had looked closer at the girl, he saw wounds, bleeding and others already healed or scarring, old once reopening. She was far too thin and pale, shaking silently in fear.
“Can you stand?” He asked her softly.
She nodded lightly, but as he let her go, he kept one arm on her waist, steadying her.
“Ve vill go to a hospital, ja? I von't hurt you.” he softly said and she nodded again, not talking because she was sure she'd be breaking out in tears if she did. And her throat hurt anyway.
He led her to a silver Volkswagen a bit further away and helped her climb in.
At the hospital they cleaned her wounds and Ludwig was told that some older ones were already infected and she needed to stay here. After she was cleaned completely and her wounds bandaged, Ludwig was allowed into her room. She looked up and Ludwig suddenly had to suppress a blush. The look of gratitude in her eyes was a bit too much for him and he now noticed that she would have been a beauty if in better health. Her hair was still a bit wet from the shower she had been given and she lightly brushed it as he sat down next to the bed.
“Do you feel better now?”
She nodded and managed a very soft “Thanks.” But her voice was thin and shaky.
He unwillingly smiled. “You're velcome. I couldn't have left someone like zhat.”
She shook her head slightly and then raised her (e/c) eyes to his. He was overwhelmed by the softness in them. “Danke.” she softly said. “Truly.”
His curiosity got the better of him and he asked. “How do you know German words?” He had noticed that she understood certain words, but wasn't able to talk German or understand complete sentences.
“My grandmother was German. She taught me some essential words when I was very young.”
she answered readily, her voice still very quiet and thin.
As she suddenly smiled softly, he had to suppress another blush.
“(first name) (last name).” she softly said, holding out a shaking hand.
“Luwig Beilschmidt.” he responded, taking that hand and softly shook it. “A pleasure to meet you.”
A little someting.

Should I continue it?



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emogirl6253 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2015  New member Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Please continue this story :)
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Sk8rchic2000 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
YES!!
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Onilovergirl Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2015
Why were you asking for help by saying your welcome in German. Hilfe is help, bite is you're welcome
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hyper-otaku Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
well, "bitte" does not only mean "you're welcome", it can also mean "please". It is even used more as "please" than as "you're welcome".
Trust me, I know what I am talking about, I'm German. :) ;)
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Gothfoxgirl Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2015
ER. MEH. GLERB. KAWAIIIIIII
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Sk8rchic2000 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Yes, Yes you should.
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coticotic Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You must *___*!!
Woah, awesome fic <3
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mishas-little-minion Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2014
OMG PLeaseee continue!
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Shyboy2641 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Ja, bitte..........
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keroppiN1 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Hobbyist
MORE bitte! Ich braucht more!
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Chelsea2001lol Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2014  Student Artist
Lol I could picture Germany in a volks wagon and Sweden XD
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SecretHetaliaLover Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2014
Please keep going
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bworld360 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2013  Student General Artist
MORE MORE MORE! I need more! *^*
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NyanGirShadow Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconmoarplz:
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Kyoyalover1998 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2013
yes PLEASE continue!!!!!!!1
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SecretHetaliaLover Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2013
Please continue
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songartist1124 Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2013  Student General Artist
Great story please continue

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Lullabydream Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This story is just .....awesome !you should really continue this really good and touching story :3
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izzeyblackstar Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Continue PLEASE!!!!!!
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BBlover01 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2013  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Continue!!!!!
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livelovepeace2 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013
Please continue? :3
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MindaVentesemo Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Defiantly continue this story!!!! I've been looking for a good Abused!Reader x Germany story where the reader was alittle bit more shy. I thing it's got a good start, the only thing that has me confused is who was the drunk man at in the story?i know he abused you, (at least, that's what it seems like,) but who exactly is he? Is he your father? Stepfather? Some kind of slave owner? Who is he and what is his relationship with the reader? Other than that, it's fantastic~! Well written and the use of German added a nice touch. Please continue, I really look forward to it C:
MV
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Lillianalicerose Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013
I will murder your family if you don't continue.
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ronnieangell Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013
Definitely continue ^.^
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Warrayfinson Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Continue please :D :+favlove:
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IfYouSayYouLoveMe Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I started crying... A lot... If only Luddy was real ;3; :iconcryforeverplz:
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MidnightRainbowFire Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
More I say... MOARRRR!!!!!
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mangagrrlluv Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Continue, please!
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Frizzles99 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconmoarplz:
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KillerKawaiiKitsune Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2013  Professional General Artist
:iconbegplz: pwease continue?
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Spiegeln Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ohmygosh this is ADORABLE. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE IT!~
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SilverFoxDiamondfang Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2013   General Artist
ME WANT MOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRREEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I beg of yoooooouuuuu!!!!!!!!!
Please!!
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ShadowDrift047 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
MEHR!
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fnioami Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2013  Student Artist
continueeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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SilviaMarti Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
OMG, this is so nice :iconomgsocuteplz: Let's jump over Lu now, he's too good to not do it :iconraepfaceplz:

It's the second time I find myself almost sobbing reading a story of yours... could you stop to make me cry plz? :XD:

No, seriously... my grandma used to speak German, she used to sing me lullabies in that language when I was younger, so I've found something familiar here :heart:

Lu's play well the hero's role... why real Lu don't exist in life :iconfoxcryplz:
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momopeach101 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
continue!!
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TinTin4life Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love it! SD fangirling over it! :D
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Wolfp3lt Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Continue!
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PurpleAsteroid Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013
It would be great if you continued it, this story is very interesting
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sillystorm28 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
yes please, this is adorable!
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:iconmoarplz:
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dbzfangirl78 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
OMG SO KAWAI! continue please ^-^
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nightwing6497 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013
Wonderful. Please continue!!!! :D
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MiaRoseLove Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is awesome! Please Continue!
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AuraYuki645 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Student Artist
Amazing~
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TwoEye Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Continue please
It is wonderful
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SoulEaterEvans4242 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Student Artist
YES DO IT
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Demone-Rosa Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
((Ja, you should continue~!
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Lazy admin is too lazy to log off ask account *facedesk*))
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Warriornightstep Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013
CONTINUE IT.



NAO :3
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Smiley2BSapphire Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yes yes yes!
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